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Hello! Lately i made this little lady here (Samus) and i was wondering what i could add to her. Also, i was wondering if she was a really stereotyped/cliché character or if she was original.. honestly.. i cant tell it myself.. I need someone to tell me! Even if it's a ''bad'' critic, dont worry, i will take it as a challenge to upgrade my character! You can also tell me what makes it different from the other characters if it's different

(More pics for her will come soon)

The whole Warrior/Ninja/Thief thing is contradictory. A class that tends to use skills and traits from all of those occupations/classes is that of a Rogue. Given how classes tend not to be of any importance until the character has generally learnt it from someone else like an apprenticeship of a sort, perhaps listing her as a street urchin or a street thief might be most fitting.

Thanks