Forums » Looking for RP » Powerful character wanted to rescue girl (closed)

Mmm... nope cant think of one! It'd be too vague anyway. Alright here we go, warning this is long This RP is always open by the way.

In a society where it's okay to just randomly beat someone up in the street or even buy them. No it's not your species in talking about but little May's. She doesn't understand what anyone says and doesn't know why she is ridiculed or why she was taken from her home. Her rights are limited and she isn't seen as a person who deserves a decent standard of living, even to the point where hospitals won't treat her and she is refused medicines, bandages and even a hot meal or warm clothes.

She eventually escapes into the forest one day with fatal wounds and fragile health. Her body is frail and malnourished and her tattered, light clothes do nothing to protect her from the biting winds and freezing snow storm. She lays against a tree trunk and falls asleep, not expecting to wake up in the morning.

Your character's home however is near by and they just happen to spot her tiny body amongst the snow for one reason or another. If it weren't for the slight rise and fall of her chest she would have been mistaken for a corpse however she is dangerously close to death.

Does your character decided to pick them up, someone rich and powerful must have a pet and it was about time they got one. However what do they do with them? Do they heal her but make her live with the debt of them saving her life? Do they keep her behind closed doors but treat her kindly? Or is she kept as a pretty pet who is shown off to other nobles and celebrities. Her life is in your hands to play with and you can do whatever you wish.

Now I'm generally looking for someone who is quite rich and powerful and has a lot of influence but is also very intimidating but they are possibly gentle and kind. They can range from anything from a millionaire people idolise to the boss of a branch in the mafia. Perhaps they are an artist or a well known detective. They'd need to be rich simply because they must be powerful and should be able to buy her medicine and mainly so they don't get arrested from stealing someone else's 'plaything'. An idea would be if your character were keeping her around and taking her to parties for appearances since having a 'pet' is a sign of social aristocracy and your character must teach May to act like a lady but must also convince her to not be so timid.

It could be anything but something around those lines is preferred.

I'm not usually picky about RP partners but there is a few things that are a must.

Frequent replies however I'm not very strict with this, I understand that you have a life.

Your time zone or your country, if you live in Australia or America I need your time zone because I can't guess if you say your city because chances are I've never heard if your city or looked up your state.

Please don't use text talk or abbreviations it really ruins the experience.

Unless there is a running dialogue or conversation or not much is happening in a scene and doesn't need to the please don't post one liners all the time. I can't work with them and it normally put's me off the RP. I'm not asking for paragraphs and paragraphs but just enough to move the story forward. If you think my character would or should do something like stumble or of she's tired you see her rubbing her eyes or giving your character a certain look I don't see this as you god modding or trying to control my character, it's probably something I should have added in anyway.

Do not write in 1st person and refer to my character as myself i.e 'I pick you up' or 'I see you glare at me'. It's really strange and it can only work well with a certain type of RP. Generally I write in 3rd person and I like to keep it that way. If you find it easier to write in 1st or 2nd then by all means do it but I will write my replies in 3rd.

Please use basic grammar. I'm talking primary/elementary school stuff, please don't be lazy, because if you don't use basic grammar I'll actually find it hard to understand what you're trying to say of get the tone wrong. Basic grammar is very important especially if your trying to get your character's point across or make a scene emotional. The things I'm talking about are possessive apostrophises, commas, upper case letters used when typing a name or place, the letter 'I' or the beginning letter of a sentence being capitalised. You'd be surprised how many people do this and it annoys me to no end. Just so long as I can understand what you are saying. However unless your character is American and or speaks in a tone where they say; 'Ya all', 'yah sure 'bout that' or 'gonna' then don't make your character speak like that unless that is generally what their speech sounds like in your head. And if they do speak like that keep it that way and make it tie into their personality. A good example is my nationality. I speak with Scottish slang in my house or just casually but I won't speak like that when I'm describing a scene and neither will May speak like that simply because not many people can understand it and she wouldn't speak like that anyway. Hopefully you see where I'm coming from.

I don't have any preference for age just as long as your not immature about it, this is meant to be an emotional and almost sophisticated RP where it questions society and it's morals and includes issues such as sexism and segregation, it's not something to joke about or put your character as over powered. My character may have psychokinesis and can levitate things, she may be intelligent but I'm not going to have her blow up a building or rescue people from fires simply because it doesn't fit and it's not realistic. We can have a bit of fantasy in it by all means but I want it to remain a serious RP with a few funny of lighthearted moments in between.

I'm not picking really and it seems like a lot but it's just generally my RP style and any good writer knows that this is generally what you're supposed to do when writing. I've just had to many RP's stop because of things like this and I really regret not telling my RP partners that this was bothering me instead of letting it die.

Please PM me if you're interested and well done if you got this far. Sorry if I've left any weird typos it's 4:25 am. If you have any questions by all means ask me them.

This seems really interesting, I really like the sound of it. It seems similiar to an idea I once had, but back then I didn't have the means to spread the idea, like we can on RPR.

If I understand, May is suppose to be like a servant class, correct? Someone who is viewed as not worthy? That's a HORRIBLE thing to be left in the woods to die, and my inner RPer is just desperate to create a character to get out there and find her.


My only question would be, did the person you are looking for have to be rich? Atleast at first? I have an idea hatching...