I'm working on a tale for my Bard to tell... to pique the interest of other players into joining her on a quest... I just don't know how good it is. I don't ever use couplets. 90% of my poetry is either free form or experimental.
This is hidden only so that the people in my RP don't come across it accidentally.
This is hidden only so that the people in my RP don't come across it accidentally.
First draft for an RP
Love of unknowing wealth
Given freely between a pair
A passion between elf and elf
The tale of Alenea and Eldarniel
Trained as often they are,
From youth they were taught,
Two mages could go far,
Together adventures had between the pair.
Love did blossom forth,
All adventures had together,
The greatest was of the North,
In the sky where the stars and moon did settle.
In the dark they did stay,
Until they parted paths,
Her heart in sway,
His in books and study.
Though they lived apart,
Something in them kept them close
A love in their heart,
A ring on her finger.
When she did return,
A lavish marriage between the two
A fierce love that would always burn
Soon her was taken from her.
She loved him always,
Never another’s lips she kissed,
A love like his always stays,
She was his ever more.
An adventurer she had been,
An adventurer she would always be,
Even as tears rolled off her chin,
She lived as she had always done.
Her only reminder of love
A ring given freely,
Bright as the stars above
The Bright Evening Star.
Given freely between a pair
A passion between elf and elf
The tale of Alenea and Eldarniel
Trained as often they are,
From youth they were taught,
Two mages could go far,
Together adventures had between the pair.
Love did blossom forth,
All adventures had together,
The greatest was of the North,
In the sky where the stars and moon did settle.
In the dark they did stay,
Until they parted paths,
Her heart in sway,
His in books and study.
Though they lived apart,
Something in them kept them close
A love in their heart,
A ring on her finger.
When she did return,
A lavish marriage between the two
A fierce love that would always burn
Soon her was taken from her.
She loved him always,
Never another’s lips she kissed,
A love like his always stays,
She was his ever more.
An adventurer she had been,
An adventurer she would always be,
Even as tears rolled off her chin,
She lived as she had always done.
Her only reminder of love
A ring given freely,
Bright as the stars above
The Bright Evening Star.
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