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Well howdy there!
I just edited Crow's profile quite a bit. He's always had his first page (Of flesh and bone), but I recently added the other two (Dragon and Werewolf respectively) and wanted to know what people thought of them?

Do I need to remove info? Add some? Move columns around? More or less pictures? Etc. etc.!


Warning: His histories do contain some serious dark content, so please don't feel obligated to read those parts if you can't / don't want to. Mostly looking for aesthetic critique anyway. :>


I personally like the aesthetic I've got going, but I want to ask and see what other people think.

Howdy. I saw no one commented here so I decided to check it out. I personally love what you have going. The info is really in deapth and you make looking for his info easy and convenient.

Its amazing.

Though I didnt read everything...lol.

I dont know if this is just me...but maybe you could add one or two pictures just to break up how much text you have?

A quote that describes your character?

The wall of text is a bit daunting.

Overall you did really amazing woth this.

Hikari score: 101/11

Do you mind if I ask which part specifically? The histories?
I feel like everything else is kind of evenly spaced with pictures (the bullet points of info anyway), but I'd like to know if you think otherwise. :>

Yeah the histories, thats exactly it. Its just a minor nitpicky thing lol. You have a gloriously amazing profile.

I was actually a bit worried about that when I made those, so I get it lol

Thank you so much!!!

My pleasure. 💗