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So I'm writing a book for personal uses not comercial and I have a few side characters who need fleshing out please help with every response I get I'll be mixing and matching to make a character appealing to me. So without further ado.

Ellara Sunshadow: Named as such because even the sun dare not touch her due to all the blood she has spilt.
A merciless vampire commander, she is three thousand years old with a penchant for leaving behind a single survivor when she fights her battles to tell of what she did. She kind of helps the protagonist for her own ends and there are a few scenes when she mentions her past. (that's all I have on her I'm hoping for someone to come up with some ideas on her past maybe some redeemable features and her appearance also a reason why she can go out in the sun.)

??? : Crazy sun elf researcher who the protagonists go to for information on the long dead race that the main protagonist is apart of called nephilim. He lives in a small cottage and is crazy in the fact that he hears voices. (I'm looking for the same as ellara past, reason for craziness and voices also appearance.

Those are the only side characters I thought of so far I may make more posts with different and will put the final result on my profile as fully fleshed characters also if you want some more info pm me and i'll be more than happy to give it.
Magic 100%
Mundane? What's that? Magic permeates every part of the setting. Almost everyone has access to strong magic.
Technology 30%
Renaissance
Combat 70%
More combat than not. The setting may be at war, and the characters will likely get involved whether or not they seek it out.
BlackMask23

Maybe the vampire commander just built up immunity to the sunlight, since she is as old as you say. Or there could be some magic spells involved, perhaps even a blessing that could protect her.
I’d be happy to help a fellow writer! :) as for your sun elf, perhaps because he is someone they go to for information he probably seeked that same knowledge and he found something that would give him that but at the cost of his sanity. The voices are actually what’s telling him the information he wants or needs.
anna-michelle2 Topic Starter

BlackMask23 & Crystaldragon126 thank you very much you both gave me exactly what I needed.

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