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Heya guys and gals and everyone in between, I've been working on a comic, and I think its alright for now. I haven't gotten very far yet, but I've kinda wanted some opinions on it right now, just to see where I'm at So, uhh, I'll post the first few pages now...

So, what do ya guys think? I'd love to hear any feedback!

Omehgosh! It really looks awesome! Are you gonna color it?

Thank you!
As for coloring, I think I'll try and stick with just black and white, although, I am thinking of coloring important parts to emphasize importance and stuff.

Hey there, I couldn't help but notice this comic, and it's really impressive! I can definitely tell the clear DBZ influences, but I'd love a little more context in terms of the overarching plot. Can you share a bit of the storyline with us, if you don't mind!

In terms of feedback, I do have a few things to say, but only if you're okay with me critiquing it. However, the storyline is rather intriguing from what I've seen so far, and the way the preview ended is rather ironically funny to me, which gives it a very sweet edge to the ensuing fight! I'd love to see more, if you have anymore.

Yep, DBZ had a big impact on it, as well as few other shonen manga.
As for the main idea (in part 1) it goes a little like this: Two boys (Kyle and Stryder) are nearing the end of their training with their master and adoptive father, Ang. As they progress further into their art they realize a darker power is at play, and not everything is what it seems.

That's about all I could give without giving too much spoilers I suppose.
And yes, critique is definitely welcomed, otherwise, what would be the point of posting something online, right? Don't worry, there's definitely more to come in the future. (I appreciate your interest with the comic~)