Hi there!! I'm looking for constructive criticism and critique for a short story I intend on publishing if I'm lucky! I'm looking for all sorts of voices, but I'd prefer people with a good few years of writing experience.
I'll post the story itself alone to allow initial comments. At the bottom will include my Revision Statement (because this is... a copy of something I turned in for a class haha, I thought it'd be useful to keep!) as well as a couple statements on what I'm looking for! Feel free to ask questions below, or in the document itself! Just, be mindful of "spoilers" in this thread so people can come in with a fresh palate! Thank you
It is ~ 6 pages.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BwsK06MELABjjmiiUuUW5KBF1tiojTtoPjBmQSggHjU/edit?usp=sharing
I'll post the story itself alone to allow initial comments. At the bottom will include my Revision Statement (because this is... a copy of something I turned in for a class haha, I thought it'd be useful to keep!) as well as a couple statements on what I'm looking for! Feel free to ask questions below, or in the document itself! Just, be mindful of "spoilers" in this thread so people can come in with a fresh palate! Thank you
Content Warning! Obviously, some spoilers, but safety & comfort always come first ^^
* Bomb, details of an explosion.
* The presumed death of a family (Parents, child) at the end
* Bomb, details of an explosion.
* The presumed death of a family (Parents, child) at the end
It is ~ 6 pages.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BwsK06MELABjjmiiUuUW5KBF1tiojTtoPjBmQSggHjU/edit?usp=sharing
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