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I have this character that I am having a hard time writing. At first, she was a carbon copy of another character, but I wanted to put actual effort into creating her so I decided to be more original. But now I'm stuck on where I should go with her backstory and personality. I keep deleting and rewriting, but I am having a hard time sticking to one thing. Any suggestions?

Warning: Character deals with heavy themes that are not suitable for younger readers.

Character Profile:
https://www.rprepository.com/site.php?char=1430215

Forgot to update the link...

You deleted your character though. I just found out about this and was about to read into it to give you advice on what I think you could add or change. But anyways, if you need help with that, DM me.

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Forums > Smalltalk > Suggestions for my character?