How can I make this description sound less like a Yeti and the Wendigo from Marvel Comics?
Description: Drathreth is a bestial humanoid that stands twice as tall as a human male. Thick, shaggy, snow-white fur covers his hulking, muscle-bound, barrel-chested body, which has exceptionally dense and tough skin. Growing from both sides of his huge bestial head is a segmented horn crafted from gleaming ice. These horns curve outwards for a third of their total length, after which the horns curve upwards for the remainder of their length. A large sagittal crest runs across the top of his head. Sitting atop his head are his extremely flexible, rounded ears. Above his large eyes, which resemble shards of glowing white ice, is a large ridged double-arched brow. Lining his short, broad muzzle are the teeth of a mammalian carnivore. Due to the fact he has no apparent neck, his head seems to sit directly on his shoulders. Reaching down to his knees are his long arms. Tipping the three fingers and a thumb on both of his large hands is a long talon made of ice. Extending from the end of his spine is a tapering tail that is four feet long. The four toes on both of his large feet each end in a long talon made of gleaming ice. The chilling howls of icy winds resonate from his voice, and even in the hottest weather, his breath freezes, leaving a frosty trail in its wake.
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Description: Drathreth is a bestial humanoid that stands twice as tall as a human male. Thick, shaggy, snow-white fur covers his hulking, muscle-bound, barrel-chested body, which has exceptionally dense and tough skin. Growing from both sides of his huge bestial head is a segmented horn crafted from gleaming ice. These horns curve outwards for a third of their total length, after which the horns curve upwards for the remainder of their length. A large sagittal crest runs across the top of his head. Sitting atop his head are his extremely flexible, rounded ears. Above his large eyes, which resemble shards of glowing white ice, is a large ridged double-arched brow. Lining his short, broad muzzle are the teeth of a mammalian carnivore. Due to the fact he has no apparent neck, his head seems to sit directly on his shoulders. Reaching down to his knees are his long arms. Tipping the three fingers and a thumb on both of his large hands is a long talon made of ice. Extending from the end of his spine is a tapering tail that is four feet long. The four toes on both of his large feet each end in a long talon made of gleaming ice. The chilling howls of icy winds resonate from his voice, and even in the hottest weather, his breath freezes, leaving a frosty trail in its wake.
https://hulksmash.fandom.com/wiki/Wendigo_King?file=Wendigo.png
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