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I've come up with a comic and I'm open to title suggestions since I don't particularly like this one


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How about "Gut-Puncher," or "Heart-String Ripper?"

Wow, as the wife of a service member who has lost friends, this cut deep. I think Above and Beyond is mote than fitting, because they do go above and beyond.

Oaky, those are ridiculous xD

I'm very sorry to hear that, Luvable, but the reason I'm looking to change it is because only the first two pages have anything to do with this. The rest if the comic isn't really going to revolve around military at all >_<"

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Here's page 3. What do you guys all think of this kind of coloring? Do you prefer grayscale with white characters or faded colors with white characters or should I do faded colors with faded character colors?

Did page 4 with flat shading, full color. And look! It's Natalia!

what should wolf boy be named? There's already Anna (Fennik Fox), Natlia (spotted tiger shark/fox) and our unnamed wolf boy.

Page 5.

I don't know why the quality on the image went down for this