This is a great start to your draft! Very tense. I'm curious to learn more about this universe you've created and how things got to be so bad!
Thank you Kim! It will all be explained in due time! The more you read, the more you'll fall in love

When's Chapter 2 coming out???
Awesome start, Krissy. Keep up the excellent writing.

*subscribes to thread* Please let us know here when new chapters are posted!!
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