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damnationfromafar wrote:
Pastel

I'm pastel on my own.
Bright only in the dullest sense.
Soft and I'm destroyed by a smudge.
Beautiful to the eyes.
Shallow in a wave of emotion.
Pretty words are everything.
Tell me I don't need saturation.
It's not fair, closed off and losing time.
So devoid of color it's hard to breath.
Pastel on my own.
I'll make peace with my home.
Tell me I'll be- don't tell me I can't see.
Caught in a rainbow.
I'm the air in between, everything is real but me.
I'm too vague.

I love this. I like the thought of how personality or a life can feel saturated or not saturated enough...it's such a good analogy and definitely relatable. I love it.

You renewed my faith in manhood. When my heart love soul spirit was broken. When I lost the war after so many battles. You healed my wounds with your strength and wisdom. Your renewed my faith in manhood. After I was totally destroyed. By being a trophy girlfriend to a wealthy playboy. You are a knight in shining armor tonight I toast you with a bottle of wine. You renewed my faith in manhood. Remember me sometime in a sunrise or a sunset. When I was down and out you were chivalrous and gallant I'll never forget you. Stay in touch you deserve so much freindship happiness love in your life. You're a prayer come true to one Sioux warrior. You renewed my faith in manhood.

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SexySultryBabe wrote:
You renewed my faith in manhood. When my heart love soul spirit was broken. When I lost the war after so many battles. You healed my wounds with your strength and wisdom. Your renewed my faith in manhood. After I was totally destroyed. By being a trophy girlfriend to a wealthy playboy. You are a knight in shining armor tonight I toast you with a bottle of wine. You renewed my faith in manhood. Remember me sometime in a sunrise or a sunset. When I was down and out you were chivalrous and gallant I'll never forget you. Stay in touch you deserve so much freindship happiness love in your life. You're a prayer come true to one Sioux warrior. You renewed my faith in manhood.


Beautiful words from a Beautiful Soul!

Thanks to everyone who put their poems in this thread. You all are beautiful talented writers.

SexySultryBabe wrote:
You renewed my faith in manhood. When my heart love soul spirit was broken. When I lost the war after so many battles. You healed my wounds with your strength and wisdom. Your renewed my faith in manhood. After I was totally destroyed. By being a trophy girlfriend to a wealthy playboy. You are a knight in shining armor tonight I toast you with a bottle of wine. You renewed my faith in manhood. Remember me sometime in a sunrise or a sunset. When I was down and out you were chivalrous and gallant I'll never forget you. Stay in touch you deserve so much freindship happiness love in your life. You're a prayer come true to one Sioux warrior. You renewed my faith in manhood.

This is a beautiful piece! Definitely can feel your gratitude and I'm glad that you are doing better!

Mere Words

(a song)

The words people say,
They paint a scene
Yeah, you hear all the words,
And you know what they mean

But that's as far as it goes
Yeah, that's as far as it goes

You get the feel,
You sympathize,
But you'll never see what it's like through their eyes

There are some things, nobody knows
Some things, nobody knows

But then, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell

(music for 2 measures)

And then your heart breaks,
Like a glass ampoule
And your love is poured out
Like a fragrant perfume

You swear to yourself that you'll never be anything other than kind
To this beautiful mind

To this beautiful heart

Because, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell


The light from inside of your broken heart
It shines through the cracks like a thousand stars
It softens the edges
Of all that it touches
Love conquers all
And you can't be defeated

I can't see the world from your point of view
But you know I'll always be rooting for you
And everything's alright, yes, everything's fine
And you've got you a friend 'til the end of all time!
~

The Smart Ones



Its not the girls who always say yes
Who just want to do, what you want to do
It's not the girls who have no favorite book
No strongly held beliefs, no political view

They're not those girls
Who make me swoon
They're not those girls
Who hook my heart
It's not those girls
who do things to me
Who put me together
And take me apart

Its the girls who will tell you no
And if they want something, they'll tell you so,
They can boldly defend their political views
They have 10 favorite books and they just cannot choose


Those are the girls
Who do something to me
Those are the girls
Who I can't wait to see
Those are the ones
With their hooks in my heart
Who can put me together
And take me apart

It's the smart ones.

Abigail_Austin wrote:
The Smart Ones



Its not the girls who always say yes
Who just want to do, what you want to do
It's not the girls who have no favorite book
No strongly held beliefs, no political view

They're not those girls
Who make me swoon
They're not those girls
Who hook my heart
It's not those girls
who do things to me
Who put me together
And take me apart

Its the girls who will tell you no
And if they want something, they'll tell you so,
They can boldly defend their political views
They have 10 favorite books and they just cannot choose


Those are the girls
Who do something to me
Those are the girls
Who I can't wait to see
Those are the ones
With their hooks in my heart
Who can put me together
And take me apart

It's the smart ones.
Great poem Abigail

You got me through December. I forever will remember you. After the war was lost after so many battles. The bitter taste of two nasty betrayals. You got me through December. I forever will remember you The freinds who got me. past the darkness and back into the light. I pray to the great spirit you are protected safe and warm. You got me through December. I forever will remember you My heart love soul spirit keep me alive. I'm a Sioux warrior I'll survive the battles and fight those oppress me in my war for acceptance. As the winds blow snow across the frozen lakes and streets. You'll got me through December. I forever will remember you.

SexySultryBabe wrote:
You got me through December. I forever will remember you. After the war was lost after so many battles. The bitter taste of two nasty betrayals. You got me through December. I forever will remember you The freinds who got me. past the darkness and back into the light. I pray to the great spirit you are protected safe and warm. You got me through December. I forever will remember you My heart love soul spirit keep me alive. I'm a Sioux warrior I'll survive the battles and fight those oppress me in my war for acceptance. As the winds blow snow across the frozen lakes and streets. You'll got me through December. I forever will remember you.

Very heart felt and meaningful <3

Abigail_Austin wrote:
Mere Words

(a song)

The words people say,
They paint a scene
Yeah, you hear all the words,
And you know what they mean

But that's as far as it goes
Yeah, that's as far as it goes

You get the feel,
You sympathize,
But you'll never see what it's like through their eyes

There are some things, nobody knows
Some things, nobody knows

But then, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell

(music for 2 measures)

And then your heart breaks,
Like a glass ampoule
And your love is poured out
Like a fragrant perfume

You swear to yourself that you'll never be anything other than kind
To this beautiful mind

To this beautiful heart

Because, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell


The light from inside of your broken heart
It shines through the cracks like a thousand stars
It softens the edges
Of all that it touches
Love conquers all
And you can't be defeated

I can't see the world from your point of view
But you know I'll always be rooting for you
And everything's alright, yes, everything's fine
And you've got you a friend 'til the end of all time!
~

Aww a beautiful song!!

Abigail_Austin wrote:
Mere Words

(a song)

The words people say,
They paint a scene
Yeah, you hear all the words,
And you know what they mean

But that's as far as it goes
Yeah, that's as far as it goes

You get the feel,
You sympathize,
But you'll never see what it's like through their eyes

There are some things, nobody knows
Some things, nobody knows

But then, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell

(music for 2 measures)

And then your heart breaks,
Like a glass ampoule
And your love is poured out
Like a fragrant perfume

You swear to yourself that you'll never be anything other than kind
To this beautiful mind

To this beautiful heart

Because, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell


The light from inside of your broken heart
It shines through the cracks like a thousand stars
It softens the edges
Of all that it touches
Love conquers all
And you can't be defeated

I can't see the world from your point of view
But you know I'll always be rooting for you
And everything's alright, yes, everything's fine
And you've got you a friend 'til the end of all time!
~
Very eloquent and impressive Abigail

SexySultryBabe wrote:
Abigail_Austin wrote:
The Smart Ones



Its not the girls who always say yes
Who just want to do, what you want to do
It's not the girls who have no favorite book
No strongly held beliefs, no political view

They're not those girls
Who make me swoon
They're not those girls
Who hook my heart
It's not those girls
who do things to me
Who put me together
And take me apart

Its the girls who will tell you no
And if they want something, they'll tell you so,
They can boldly defend their political views
They have 10 favorite books and they just cannot choose


Those are the girls
Who do something to me
Those are the girls
Who I can't wait to see
Those are the ones
With their hooks in my heart
Who can put me together
And take me apart

It's the smart ones.
Great poem Abigail

Thank you SSB

SexySultryBabe wrote:
You got me through December. I forever will remember you. After the war was lost after so many battles. The bitter taste of two nasty betrayals. You got me through December. I forever will remember you The freinds who got me. past the darkness and back into the light. I pray to the great spirit you are protected safe and warm. You got me through December. I forever will remember you My heart love soul spirit keep me alive. I'm a Sioux warrior I'll survive the battles and fight those oppress me in my war for acceptance. As the winds blow snow across the frozen lakes and streets. You'll got me through December. I forever will remember you.

That's a very sweet sentiment

damnationfromafar wrote:
Abigail_Austin wrote:
Mere Words

(a song)

The words people say,
They paint a scene
Yeah, you hear all the words,
And you know what they mean

But that's as far as it goes
Yeah, that's as far as it goes

You get the feel,
You sympathize,
But you'll never see what it's like through their eyes

There are some things, nobody knows
Some things, nobody knows

But then, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell

(music for 2 measures)

And then your heart breaks,
Like a glass ampoule
And your love is poured out
Like a fragrant perfume

You swear to yourself that you'll never be anything other than kind
To this beautiful mind

To this beautiful heart

Because, one day
The veil, it tore
In these mere words,
There's something more

It falls on you
Just like a spell
And you see more
Than words can tell


The light from inside of your broken heart
It shines through the cracks like a thousand stars
It softens the edges
Of all that it touches
Love conquers all
And you can't be defeated

I can't see the world from your point of view
But you know I'll always be rooting for you
And everything's alright, yes, everything's fine
And you've got you a friend 'til the end of all time!
~

Aww a beautiful song!!

Thanks, Damnationfromafar!

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