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North-Wood wrote:
This is actually a song I started, but cannot configure a third verse yet. Hoping something comes to me so I can properly finish this. However....

Healing rain is falling down, I know from where

I'm trapped far away from those Golden Gates, I'm out of place.

In and out of Hell, the World is breaking

It's hard to find my way through the fire and the flame.

I'm trying every day to make it, to make it through the day

Yet I feel like I'm dyin every step of the way

Lord, if you're there, why do I suffer so?!

The storms come and I feel so alone

I just want to feel your Glory

Just want to feel it one last time

Just one last time, Lord, and I'll be able to survive.


I'm an angel with broken wings

I'm a soul that's out of place

Just want to go home

Tired of being cold

Tired of being alone

I don't know where else to go

So Lord, I beg you to hold me close.


I know what it’s like to be beaten down

I know what it’s like to hear the jeering laughter all around

I know the sound of those painful chains

That hold me to the ground

I’ve felt the pain so many times, it’s normal now

Peace is just a joke

A story told by the fire

As we slowly die

In a world that barely survives.


I'm an angel with broken wings

I'm a soul that's out of place

Just want to go home

Tired of being cold

Tired of being alone

I don't know where else to go

So Lord, I beg you to hold me close.

That's pretty North-Wood. So you play an instrument too?
Abigail_Austin wrote:
NeonGreenHair17 wrote:
Your heart baffles me in every way
When I'm with you I rarely know what to say.
You soul, so kind, and sweet as can be.
It makes me wonder why you bother talking to me.

I don't deserve your kindest word.
I keep believing you'll fly away like a bird,
Leaving my arms with a trail of feathers,
I'd wait for your return through the harshest of weather.

You've been hurt even though you did no wrong.
If I could I'd sing you every song,
Just to see your smile light up your face,
I'd hold you always in my embrace.

You do what people think you should.
And that path isn't always good.
Every word in this poem is true.
Including these five more:
I think I love you.

-Neo. Written for a special someone.

Awww that's so sweet!! Lucky girl!

That's what I said.
North-Wood

((No. I can get a tune/pattern out of an instrument. . Love the guitar, but don't have one.))
NeonGreenHair17

The sun shines bright,
But not as bright as you.

I want to hold your light.
I want to keep you from feeling blue.

All the sadness and hatred in your life,
I want to take away and turn it to a smile.

All the anger, the pain and strife.
I want to take it away, if only for a short while.

-Neo. Another poem for her.
North-Wood

NeonGreenHair17 wrote:
The sun shines bright,
But not as bright as you.

I want to hold your light.
I want to keep you from feeling blue.

All the sadness and hatred in your life,
I want to take away and turn it to a smile.

All the anger, the pain and strife.
I want to take it away, if only for a short while.

-Neo. Another poem for her.

Nice! Love it!
NeonGreenHair17

North-Wood wrote:
NeonGreenHair17 wrote:
The sun shines bright,
But not as bright as you.

I want to hold your light.
I want to keep you from feeling blue.

All the sadness and hatred in your life,
I want to take away and turn it to a smile.

All the anger, the pain and strife.
I want to take it away, if only for a short while.

-Neo. Another poem for her.

Nice! Love it!


Thanks. I hope she does too. She is just amazing. Truly amazing. I'm lucky to know her.
ShadowWolfie

Thinking of you fills me with a wonderful feeling,
Your tender love, your warm embrace,
Your sweet kisses,
I love your touch,

Your gentle nature, and loving heart,
I love the way you smile,
And the way your eyes sparkle,
When you laugh,

I adore the sound of your voice,
Strong and enduring,
The sweetest sound is your name,
As I say it over and over again,

You have allowed me to open up my heart,
You thought me how to love,
trust, live and to smile again,
You have brought so much into my life,

I never thought I could feel this way again,
Now I see a perfect life ahead,
New places for my heart to explore,
New thoughts, new memories, new feelings,

Feelings that go far beyond expressions,
I can't stop myself from holding back the tears,
Tears of happiness, of a love so strong,
It surges through my heart like a storm,

Each tear falls warm upon my face,
And I smile,
Such a perfect love we have for each other,
You fill my life with joy and laughter,

With dreams and with the promise,
Of a new tomorrow,
I will forever be indebted to you,
You have changed my life,

You have captured my heart,
You now hold the key,
Your love I will live and die for,
I will treasure each and every moment

I spend with you,
And I promise to love you for the rest of my life.
Because my eternal love ..... You complete me.

~Made By: ShadowWolfie
For: Someone That Means The World To Me <3
NeonGreenHair17

ShadowWolfie wrote:
Thinking of you fills me with a wonderful feeling,
Your tender love, your warm embrace,
Your sweet kisses,
I love your touch,
Your gentle nature, and loving heart,
I love the way you smile,
And the way your eyes sparkle,
When you laugh,
I adore the sound of your voice,
Strong and enduring,
The sweetest sound is your name,
As I say it over and over again,
You have allowed me to open up my heart,
You thought me how to love,
trust, live and to smile again,
You have brought so much into my life,
I never thought I could feel this way again,
Now I see a perfect life ahead,
New places for my heart to explore,
New thoughts, new memories, new feelings,
Feelings that go far beyond expressions,
I can't stop myself from holding back the tears,
Tears of happiness, of a love so strong,
It surges through my heart like a storm,
Each tear falls warm upon my face,
And I smile,
Such a perfect love we have for each other,
You fill my life with joy and laughter,
With dreams and with the promise,
Of a new tomorrow,
I will forever be indebted to you,
You have changed my life,
You have captured my heart,
You now hold the key,
Your love I will live and die for,
I will treasure each and every moment
I spend with you,
And I promise to love you for the rest of my life.
Because my eternal love ..... You complete me.

That's so beautiful. Nicely done, Shade.
ShadowWolfie

"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"
Are the words you'd hear Will Shakespeare say.
But, my love, I'm not the bard.
This poetry thing is very hard.

I'm going to try with all my might
To get the way I feel just right.
Feelings that go deep inside,
Feelings that I just can't hide.

From the day you came in to my life,
These feelings have been running rife.
So what I say I swear is true.
I want to spend my life with you.

I see your face, I see your smile,
I see your love, and all the while,
I think of what the future brings,
Of hope, of love, of many things.

There is no doubt within my mind
That you really are the loving kind.
I'm grateful to the Lord above
That he gave someone like you for me to love.

There will NEVER be anyone else for me,
And I'll show for all the gods to see
My love for you in every way
And prove the truth in what I say.

In my eyes, my love, you are
The most beautiful, by far.
And my Prince, you will see
I will love you for eternity.

It's taken a lifetime for me to find
Someone who can blow my mind
And fill my heart the way you do,
But best of all .... you love me too

~Made By: Shade <3
ShadowWolfie

NeonGreenHair17 wrote:
Your heart baffles me in every way
When I'm with you I rarely know what to say.
You soul, so kind, and sweet as can be.
It makes me wonder why you bother talking to me.

I don't deserve your kindest word.
I keep believing you'll fly away like a bird,
Leaving my arms with a trail of feathers,
I'd wait for your return through the harshest of weather.

You've been hurt even though you did no wrong.
If I could I'd sing you every song,
Just to see your smile light up your face,
I'd hold you always in my embrace.

You do what people think you should.
And that path isn't always good.
Every word in this poem is true.
Including these five more:
I think I love you.

-Neo. Written for a special someone.

Sounds great Neo! Absolutely breath-taking! <3
NeonGreenHair17

ShadowWolfie wrote:
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?"
Are the words you'd hear Will Shakespeare say.
But, my love, I'm not the bard.
This poetry thing is very hard.

I'm going to try with all my might
To get the way I feel just right.
Feelings that go deep inside,
Feelings that I just can't hide.

From the day you came in to my life,
These feelings have been running rife.
So what I say I swear is true.
I want to spend my life with you.

I see your face, I see your smile,
I see your love, and all the while,
I think of what the future brings,
Of hope, of love, of many things.

There is no doubt within my mind
That you really are the loving kind.
I'm grateful to the Lord above
That he gave someone like you for me to love.

There will NEVER be anyone else for me,
And I'll show for all the gods to see
My love for you in every way
And prove the truth in what I say.

In my eyes, my love, you are
The most beautiful, by far.
And my Prince, you will see
I will love you for eternity.

It's taken a lifetime for me to find
Someone who can blow my mind
And fill my heart the way you do,
But best of all .... you love me too

~Made By: Shade <3

You should make a poem book.
ShadowWolfie

There you are again,
Standing under the rain.
Your mind filled with thoughts
That cannot be explained.

A wave of emotions flow through you,
Sadness, happiness, anger, regret.
In pain because you confessed
The things that should've remained unsaid.

Unsure how much time has passed,
As you stare blankly at the gloomy sky.
Recalling the memories you've had together,
Knowing they're precious and unlike any other.

You start to take a single step,
As you plan your next move.
Because now you have to accept the truth,
That things won't go back to the way they used to.

~Shade <3
Abigail_Austin Topic Starter

ShadowWolfie wrote:
There you are again,
Standing under the rain.
Your mind filled with thoughts
That cannot be explained.

A wave of emotions flow through you,
Sadness, happiness, anger, regret.
In pain because you confessed
The things that should've remained unsaid.

Unsure how much time has passed,
As you stare blankly at the gloomy sky.
Recalling the memories you've had together,
Knowing they're precious and unlike any other.

You start to take a single step,
As you plan your next move.
Because now you have to accept the truth,
That things won't go back to the way they used to.

~Shade <3

Nice poem! Thanks for sharing!
You think good men can't do bad things.
But I know they lie and steal and cheat.
You think a strong man cannot break
But I have seen him weep.

You think the honest do not lie
But I know his darkest secrets.
You think the happy do not cry
But they do, in private.

I know these things because I am them
And each of them is me
You think because I'm happy
That I am truly free

I have my sorrows, I have my woes
But I've kept them to myself
I have my demons and my ghosts
Allow me to explain.

My past does not define me
My mistakes have helped me grow.
They may have shattered my oldest dreams
But they did not destroy my soul.

Listen to your anger, and your hurt,
Your sorrow, misery and woe.
But listen to them briefly,
So you can let them go.

Focus on your future,
On your happiness and goals too.
Look not to the outside world,
But look instead to you.
Abigail_Austin Topic Starter

Zoe_Ana wrote:
You think good men can't do bad things.
But I know they lie and steal and cheat.
You think a strong man cannot break
But I have seen him weep.

You think the honest do not lie
But I know his darkest secrets.
You think the happy do not cry
But they do, in private.

I know these things because I am them
And each of them is me
You think because I'm happy
That I am truly free

I have my sorrows, I have my woes
But I've kept them to myself
I have my demons and my ghosts
Allow me to explain.

My past does not define me
My mistakes have helped me grow.
They may have shattered my oldest dreams
But they did not destroy my soul.

Listen to your anger, and your hurt,
Your sorrow, misery and woe.
But listen to them briefly,
So you can let them go.

Focus on your future,
On your happiness and goals too.
Look not to the outside world,
But look instead to you.

Loveeeee it!!
RimCaster

Across my entire life I've been called many things.
By people who called themselves my 'friends'.
I don't remember everything that they said.
But Certainly those weren't nice words.


You think I'm useless.
I was in past.
But now I'm learning things.
So I could be more valuable asset to society.
Obviously there would be subjects in life.
Where my knowledge would be insufficient.

You think I'm weak.
But before we will start.
What is definition of strength?
Is it mental capacity able to perform under stress?
Is it physical strength and ability to defeat multiple opponents?
Or is it ability to control people?
If so it is then yes I'm weak, but so is the rest of humanity.
If someone tells you they're strongest.
Either they're lying or they're fools.
No one is strong forever as always there will be person superior to you.

There will always be a person which is stronger
There will always be a person which has bigger influence.
There will always be a person which can hide his emotions better.
They may be giants but they will fall harder.

So I'm always weak? No!
Even I can be like David slaying Goliath.
Even I can manipulate people to do my bidding.
Even I can hide my emotions behind the mask.
Although I leave myself vulnerable when I'm in home.
I weep, shout and grieve but no one needs to know about that.

Now you're saying I'm stupid.
And again you've right.
I don't know the world.
And it's vast-less mysteries.
waiting to be discovered.

Does that make me a fool?
No because I admit to my lack of knowledge.
I know what I know and you know what you know.
In society we complement ourselves.
We're like small gears, working in bigger mechanism called world.
Even I have my moments of ingenuity, so next time be more forgiving.

I'm cold hearted?
Yes I'm although it's card I give only to special people.
I can be patient person add to it little bit of laziness.
You would think I forgot about it?
No! I remember that, I simply don't see need to make a fuss over it.
But push my buttons or hurt anyone I care.
And I will make sure to destroy you and your identity.
But even I have a moments where I'm warm as sun.
Those moments certainly aren't for you.
I want you to remember that forever.

Now you know I can be as dangerous as you if not more.
That I hide big mean beast inside me, which may be chained.
It's not for my safety but yours, be grateful for the mercy I show you.
So why are you pissing me off? Do you want to inflate your ego?
So you would think that you're superior to me?
I don't care about your motive, but I won't warn you.
Because once I unleash the beast from it's cage and chains.
YOU WILL BE DEAD!

Dedicated to anyone who wants to mess with me and my friends!
Many years have passed,
many forgotten battles,
many faces.

Banners knifes and blades,
laid there to rest,
a gravestone without a name.

So many memories,
So many names,
So many faces,
Will they find some rest?
When no tombstone will spoke their names,
When no victories will be sung on their deaths.

I laid in my side and they fall from my ear,
and just like that, the field is gone,
and no stories will be told in their names.
Darion (played anonymously)

My heart is beating
My skin is bleeding
My lungs are screaming

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is frozen
My veins are bloodless
My mouth is mute

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

I hide behind walls
My walls
My cage
Tall walls
Thick bars
Invisible

I cling to myself
Cold clammy hands
Stuck in dark pockets
Rose red lips
Painted face
Hiding my pale disgrace

Tugging on my sweater to keep shivers away
Tattoos
Piercings
Loud music
All to keep
This fragile frame hidden

They can think I'm crazy
Rebellious
Stubborn
Young
Stupid
Just make sure they don't know I'm sick

My heart is racing
My skin is scarred
My lungs are exhausted

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is aching
My veins are showing
My mouth is pretending

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

They've tried before
The few
The bold
Careless
Clumsy
To knock down the walls

Hands balled into fists
Hidden behind my back
Fake smiles
Stiff handshakes
Empty laughs
Concealing the past

Pulling my hat forward further to hide my face
Dark clothing
Crazy hair
Walking faster
Down alleyways and streets
All to mask the fear

They can think I'm crazy
Rebellious
Stubborn
Young
Stupid
Just make sure they don't know I'm sick

My heart pounding
My skin is quivering
My lungs are weak

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is aching
My veins are empty
My mouth is silent

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

Nobody knows I'm dying
Crying
Terrified
Lost and exhausted
That's the way it is
But at least nobody knows I'm sick
RimCaster

Darion wrote:
My heart is beating
My skin is bleeding
My lungs are screaming

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is frozen
My veins are bloodless
My mouth is mute

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

I hide behind walls
My walls
My cage
Tall walls
Thick bars
Invisible

I cling to myself
Cold clammy hands
Stuck in dark pockets
Rose red lips
Painted face
Hiding my pale disgrace

Tugging on my sweater to keep shivers away
Tattoos
Piercings
Loud music
All to keep
This fragile frame hidden

They can think I'm crazy
Rebellious
Stubborn
Young
Stupid
Just make sure they don't know I'm sick

My heart is racing
My skin is scarred
My lungs are exhausted

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is aching
My veins are showing
My mouth is pretending

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

They've tried before
The few
The bold
Careless
Clumsy
To knock down the walls

Hands balled into fists
Hidden behind my back
Fake smiles
Stiff handshakes
Empty laughs
Concealing the past

Pulling my hat forward further to hide my face
Dark clothing
Crazy hair
Walking faster
Down alleyways and streets
All to mask the fear

They can think I'm crazy
Rebellious
Stubborn
Young
Stupid
Just make sure they don't know I'm sick

My heart pounding
My skin is quivering
My lungs are weak

But nobody feels it
But nobody sees it
But nobody hears it

My chest is aching
My veins are empty
My mouth is silent

But nobody knows
Nobody knows
Nobody

Nobody knows I'm dying
Crying
Terrified
Lost and exhausted
That's the way it is
But at least nobody knows I'm sick


That's cool bro
Abigail_Austin Topic Starter

RimCaster wrote:
Across my entire life I've been called many things.
By people who called themselves my 'friends'.
I don't remember everything that they said.
But Certainly those weren't nice words.

I like this!


You think I'm useless.
I was in past.
But now I'm learning things.
So I could be more valuable asset to society.
Obviously there would be subjects in life.
Where my knowledge would be insufficient.

You think I'm weak.
But before we will start.
What is definition of strength?
Is it mental capacity able to perform under stress?
Is it physical strength and ability to defeat multiple opponents?
Or is it ability to control people?
If so it is then yes I'm weak, but so is the rest of humanity.
If someone tells you they're strongest.
Either they're lying or they're fools.
No one is strong forever as always there will be person superior to you.

There will always be a person which is stronger
There will always be a person which has bigger influence.
There will always be a person which can hide his emotions better.
They may be giants but they will fall harder.

So I'm always weak? No!
Even I can be like David slaying Goliath.
Even I can manipulate people to do my bidding.
Even I can hide my emotions behind the mask.
Although I leave myself vulnerable when I'm in home.
I weep, shout and grieve but no one needs to know about that.

Now you're saying I'm stupid.
And again you've right.
I don't know the world.
And it's vast-less mysteries.
waiting to be discovered.

Does that make me a fool?
No because I admit to my lack of knowledge.
I know what I know and you know what you know.
In society we complement ourselves.
We're like small gears, working in bigger mechanism called world.
Even I have my moments of ingenuity, so next time be more forgiving.

I'm cold hearted?
Yes I'm although it's card I give only to special people.
I can be patient person add to it little bit of laziness.
You would think I forgot about it?
No! I remember that, I simply don't see need to make a fuss over it.
But push my buttons or hurt anyone I care.
And I will make sure to destroy you and your identity.
But even I have a moments where I'm warm as sun.
Those moments certainly aren't for you.
I want you to remember that forever.

Now you know I can be as dangerous as you if not more.
That I hide big mean beast inside me, which may be chained.
It's not for my safety but yours, be grateful for the mercy I show you.
So why are you pissing me off? Do you want to inflate your ego?
So you would think that you're superior to me?
I don't care about your motive, but I won't warn you.
Because once I unleash the beast from it's cage and chains.
YOU WILL BE DEAD!

Dedicated to anyone who wants to mess with me and my friends!

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