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Hello, I am new to writing and recently found the site Wattpad. I know that this is cringe worthy but I wanted to start somewhere to get feedback about what I could do better before I publish a full book and then no one likes it. I was hoping some people could read it and give me a few tips on what I could change to be a better writer.

Fnaf Oneshots

I hope you enjoy and please no hateful comments!

I thought they were cute.

Thanks, you can tell how hard I tried to not be cringe worthy.

I didn't think they were cringey. I enjoyed them

Great job, just read them! I can't wait to see more.

Thanks, If you wanna see anything in particular lemmie know and I'll try to do it!

Love them!

Thank You!

Your welcome

Very cool!!

Thank you!

Cool! Quite creative!

It isn't cringe-worthy at all! Maybe you could add some inter monologue. Although, I'm not sure if you could do that in 2nd person quite easily depending on how you write. But I said that so it doesn't feel all action and no feel. I'm not sure if this applies completely but there is a writing rule that says, Show, don't tell.

Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol

I will try being more Feel and less action, thanks for the tip.