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Hello, I am new to writing and recently found the site Wattpad. I know that this is cringe worthy but I wanted to start somewhere to get feedback about what I could do better before I publish a full book and then no one likes it. I was hoping some people could read it and give me a few tips on what I could change to be a better writer.

Fnaf Oneshots

I hope you enjoy and please no hateful comments!
JetStorm

I thought they were cute.
PossitivelyNoOne Topic Starter

JetStorm wrote:
I thought they were cute.
Thanks, you can tell how hard I tried to not be cringe worthy. XD
JetStorm

PossitivelyNoOne wrote:
JetStorm wrote:
I thought they were cute.
Thanks, you can tell how hard I tried to not be cringe worthy.
XD


I didn't think they were cringey. I enjoyed them
Great job, just read them! I can't wait to see more.
PossitivelyNoOne Topic Starter

EvanlynDestiny wrote:
Great job, just read them! I can't wait to see more.
Thanks, If you wanna see anything in particular lemmie know and I'll try to do it!
Icysoul

Love them!
PossitivelyNoOne Topic Starter

Icysoul wrote:
Love them!
Thank You!
Icysoul

PossitivelyNoOne wrote:
Icysoul wrote:
Love them!
Thank You!

Your welcome
Very cool!! :D :D
PossitivelyNoOne Topic Starter

ChocolateIceCream wrote:
Very cool!! :D :D
Thank you!
Rogue-Scribe

Cool! Quite creative!
It isn't cringe-worthy at all! Maybe you could add some inter monologue. Although, I'm not sure if you could do that in 2nd person quite easily depending on how you write. But I said that so it doesn't feel all action and no feel. I'm not sure if this applies completely but there is a writing rule that says, Show, don't tell.

Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol :D
PossitivelyNoOne Topic Starter

EchoSama wrote:
It isn't cringe-worthy at all! Maybe you could add some inter monologue. Although, I'm not sure if you could do that in 2nd person quite easily depending on how you write. But I said that so it doesn't feel all action and no feel. I'm not sure if this applies completely but there is a writing rule that says, Show, don't tell.

Not sure this was helpful at all but eh... lol :D

:) I will try being more Feel and less action, thanks for the tip.

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