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Since my mischievous characters end up in combat scenes from time to time, I'm used to searching Google for the effects of injuries. I was researching tools to help me write about them with greater accuracy and found this awesome article.

As stated under their "General Remarks", "There’s a lot of ‘relatively’ and ‘probably’ in this article because everyone reacts differently to injury," which especially counts when writing about someone who isn't quite human! But it covers all sorts of general symptoms in basic details, from diagrams describing the stages of blood loss (in percentage and liters, wowee!) to the effects of being in a leaky spaceship. It's clear and concise and for those of you who are squeamish, don't worry, there aren't any pictures.
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Reactions to injury - including emotional reactions, fainting and shock.
Minor injuries - such as bruises, grazes and sprains
Head injuries - from black eyes to severe concussions
Broken bones
Dislocated joints
Cutting and Piercing - for various locations, including blood loss symptoms and figures.
Blunt trauma - getting hit, internal injuries.
Burns - including electrical burns
Hostile environments - such as extreme cold and heat, oxygen deprivation and exposure to vacuum.
References - useful websites.
I hope some of you will find it as useful as I did.
Mate, you have no idea how much this helps! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
A treasure to cherish! Thank you for finding this!!!
Oh yes. More reasons and methods for me to do harm with my comic~ Amazing~~~
This is incredible!!! Using it!
A most glorious find! Well done!
Nocte Creatura (played by Jonathon)

This is such a great resource. Thank you for sharing with us.
Libertine Topic Starter

I'm so stoked to see so many of you are already enjoying it!
Thank you so much for sharing this! It's incredibly useful. :)
Freakin awesome dude. This will cime in so handy for me and my characters
That's why you make dem undead characters! You just need to recognize injuries only when a limb gets torn off.. or a ligament, or tendon.. and in some cases deep flesh cut.

Then someone goes all Winchester and blesses entire water tower, or tosses their silver cutlery...
Asroc

This is helpful and should be used for people who are clueless on how injuries work.
You caught my attention with the burns and hostile environments area. Now maybe I can write decent backfiring side effects for my Phoenix characters. XD

But, no really. You are a Gaiasend, and I thank you for this.
Songay (played by Yuka)

...My internet history probably contains far too many psychology articles, disgusting disease references and biological warfare references to be nor- wait, writer-roleplay, makes sense now. I always was the one getting pulled up in my schooling years for being quite visceral ;)
Arianrhod

What about a broken horn on a horned being? One with a bone core? How serious would that be? Would it bleed? :O
Libertine Topic Starter

Arianrhod wrote:
What about a broken horn on a horned being? One with a bone core? How serious would that be? Would it bleed? :O
That all depends upon the anatomy of the character involved. What animal is their horn fashioned after? You can Google something as vague as "goat broken horn" and you'll find all sorts of symptoms and treatments, from veterinary resources to farmer blogs.
Duncan Erised (played anonymously)

I'll need to do some extensive additional research over injuries, symptoms and the like before I begin my next RP. This helps give me a good idea of where and how to start. Thank you.
Like some deer antlers and some ram "crowns", they are designed to fall off so breaking isn't much of a hassle. They are crown back the next spring

But those with horns that are meant to stay there, broken horn doesn't grow back, may bleeed a little but rarily brings about anything worse. Even if the damage extends to base. Still, every now and then infection may spread from the broken horn to the.. horny one.

In most extreme cases, all ailments that broken horn may bring can be fixed by removing the entire horn!

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