*Peeks in shyly*
Sure it couldn't hurt 😊💖
I'll give it a go, for some funs.
This is the only RPR profile that I'm seriously proud of. >>
This is the only RPR profile that I'm seriously proud of. >>
*poses*
Rate me bby~
Rate me bby~
Wanna take another jab?
Gonna do this when I get home
I wouldn't mind some constructive criticism!
"3.. 2... 1... let's jam."
I would like to show you my character
Cut open her skull.
Look into her head.
'Cause I feel
I can endure the critique.
I would like to show you my character
Cut open her skull.
Look into her head.
'Cause I feel
I can endure the critique.
Throw this girl in to be looked at ♡
she can use some critsim
This guy, if you feel so inclined!
I went with a sparser rpr, with extra tidbits to be found if you dig a little deeper (through less-overt collapse tags lol). I’m not sure if there are too many collapse tags though, especially on his /// page. Also I’m not sure if the glitchy ‘encrypted’ text on his entry logs are too annoying to read!
I went with a sparser rpr, with extra tidbits to be found if you dig a little deeper (through less-overt collapse tags lol). I’m not sure if there are too many collapse tags though, especially on his /// page. Also I’m not sure if the glitchy ‘encrypted’ text on his entry logs are too annoying to read!
Kygor the Big High War God wrote:
Judge me, oh great one.
Pages: it is a lot to read though! And the language isn't an easy one--it's English, obviously, but it's extremely formal and dated. This isn't really a complaint, but it's something to keep in mind on a site where I've met multiple players who's first language is not English. I would maybe recommend turning the "Guestbook" page into an "OOC" page where you can discuss what you're looking for in a role play or player.
The story: I love the world and story you've written! It's really interesting and honestly I don't have anything to pick at.
Overall, I think you have an interesting character but I'm just worried about how well he can fit into even fantasy RPs. he seems like he'd be a big bad to a group of protagonists.
My character is a daemon, in a sense, and I'd love for some feedback. Just poking this to see if anyone else would like to check her out.
Ohhh, can you do Belinda? Just a note her page is fairly mature. I just made her a few days ago, brand spanking new, wasn't even a thought in my head until 1am that night hahah.
Why no' try Lucian on for size? Please note, he is fairly in flux from time to time, but I like where he is right now. Also, sorry for the bog-basic default profile. I have a better one on my Deviantart account that I wrote up.
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